14 Januari 2010

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Friday morning, I reached my school at about six-fifteen. There’s still wasn’t anyone there. I walked to my classroom calmly. The door still closed, I opened is slowly. I saw him in the corner, reading a book. I sat on my chair and open my chemistry book. We have a test today and I’d better to study. I read it till he surprised me. He sat in front of me. I looked at him, and he gave me his best smile. You know, He always look so cute every time He smiling.

“ So, what is smile for? Something funny?” I asked him fiercely .

“uh.. nothing.” He answered.

“So, what’s wrong?” I asked him with my straight face.

“Just wanna say Good Morning ”. He answered and now with wider smile. I was a bit annoyed by his smile.

I sighed, stand up and walked out the class.

“Wait a minute!” He stopped me.

“What’s up?” I ask angrily.

“We need to talk.” He looked through the door.

“About what? We have no thing to talk.” I looked at his face, his eyes said “I’m sorry”.

“ Are you angry with me?”

“Nope.” I looked through the door, I still angry cause he break his promise to come to Lucy’s Birthday party, I know he didn’t wanna meet Lucy, his former girlfriend, “ May I go?” I asked.

“I want to talk with you, do you free this afternoon?” He looked at me.

“Yeah,”

“Good. I’ll wait on the hill behind school at 4.30.” He raised my hand, “ I hope you’ll come.” He let go off my hand and walk out. I was surprised and a bit curious with it.

4.30 pm.

I go to the hill behind the school, I saw he was standing on the top of hill, under a big tree. He was playing his violin, I can felt that He was crying. I felt a sadness around there. I don’t want to disturb him, I turned around and walked but his hand stopped me.

“ Don’t leave..” he hold my hand. I turned back and looked at his face, there’s a warm smile and made me felt safe.

“I wanna show you something.” He took me by the hand and we walked to the top of hill.

I was surprised when we reach the top. I can see the village clearly. I saw the mountain as a background of the village. The wind blew gently. I closed my eyes and felt the fresh air. I opened my eyes and looked at him, he was looked at me for long time, my face was blushing when he smiles to me. I was nervous a little.

“What’s wrong?” I asked him fiercely, hide my nervous.

“Uh, nothing. You’re look so beauty today,” He tried to hide his smile.

“ Really? So, what’s the meaning of that smile? Huh?” I started to attack him. He stay calm.

“Do you like this place?” He asked me.

“Yeah,” I answered fiercely, “ So, what do you want?”

“Uh, well…” He sighed.

“ Can you look at that place?” He pointed toward my home.

“Yeah.., I can see it clearly.”

“Do you know that place?” He asked me.

“Of course ! That’s my home!” I started angry.

“Ok... Ok…, you know, I can see what happened on your backyard from here.

He’s right, I can see my sister playing there.

“So?” I asked angrily.

“You know, I always standing here every day to watch what are you doing.” I looked at him, He still looked at my house.

“W-WHAT?! What do you want? Hah?” I was so angry, I wanna hit him.

“Calm down, I just watch you.” He tried to calm me down.

“What for?” I still angry.

“Cause I can see you for long time? Don’t you know that I always care of you everytime ?!” He said with angrily, but I know he just bluffing.

“Hey, what’s wrong with you?!” I getting cooler.

“Don’t you know that I always care with you? Don’t you know that I always missed you? Don’t you know that I really loved you? Don’t you know that I cant live without you? Hah?”

“W-what..” I’m speechless.

“Why you never try to listen to me? I always try, and you never give me a chance.” He sat under the tree, playing with his finger.

“What do you mean?” I sat beside him. I still can’t believe what I heard, but I still calm.

He looked at me, looked my eyes and said, “ I love you, Claire..”

I said nothing, looked at sky, it look so clear, the clouds playing around, want me to say “Yes Va, I love you too..”. The wind blew gently.

“Claire…” He called me.

“What?” I looked at him, smiling gently.

“You mad?” He looks so afraid.

“Nope.” I said fiercely.

“I-I’m sorry Claire, I didn’t mean that thing, I ..”

“Sssh…” I put my finger on his lips. “Don’t say anything, Va. Look at that cloud, Isn’t look so beauty?”

We gazed at the clouds in the sky. They looks so beautiful when they reddish. The wind whispers gently make me felt peaceful.

Lightlantern

11-01-2010

===============================================================This is my first short story in English. I’m sorry if this story not interested anymore and cause my English is not good, I know there’s so much mistake –especially in grammar- hope you can correct my mistake and give me suggestion.

Thanks for read it . .

Ini cerpen pertama –dari sekian banyak cerpen- Aya yang jadi, gat au kenapa yang jadi malah yang pake bahasa inggris, padahal bahasa inggris Aya berantakan. Jadi, kalo banyak kesalahan dan ceritanya ga asik mohon maaf, soalnya Aya baru belajar,,,

Mohon Kritik dan Sarannya ya..



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14 Januari 2010

No Title

Friday morning, I reached my school at about six-fifteen. There’s still wasn’t anyone there. I walked to my classroom calmly. The door still closed, I opened is slowly. I saw him in the corner, reading a book. I sat on my chair and open my chemistry book. We have a test today and I’d better to study. I read it till he surprised me. He sat in front of me. I looked at him, and he gave me his best smile. You know, He always look so cute every time He smiling.

“ So, what is smile for? Something funny?” I asked him fiercely .

“uh.. nothing.” He answered.

“So, what’s wrong?” I asked him with my straight face.

“Just wanna say Good Morning ”. He answered and now with wider smile. I was a bit annoyed by his smile.

I sighed, stand up and walked out the class.

“Wait a minute!” He stopped me.

“What’s up?” I ask angrily.

“We need to talk.” He looked through the door.

“About what? We have no thing to talk.” I looked at his face, his eyes said “I’m sorry”.

“ Are you angry with me?”

“Nope.” I looked through the door, I still angry cause he break his promise to come to Lucy’s Birthday party, I know he didn’t wanna meet Lucy, his former girlfriend, “ May I go?” I asked.

“I want to talk with you, do you free this afternoon?” He looked at me.

“Yeah,”

“Good. I’ll wait on the hill behind school at 4.30.” He raised my hand, “ I hope you’ll come.” He let go off my hand and walk out. I was surprised and a bit curious with it.

4.30 pm.

I go to the hill behind the school, I saw he was standing on the top of hill, under a big tree. He was playing his violin, I can felt that He was crying. I felt a sadness around there. I don’t want to disturb him, I turned around and walked but his hand stopped me.

“ Don’t leave..” he hold my hand. I turned back and looked at his face, there’s a warm smile and made me felt safe.

“I wanna show you something.” He took me by the hand and we walked to the top of hill.

I was surprised when we reach the top. I can see the village clearly. I saw the mountain as a background of the village. The wind blew gently. I closed my eyes and felt the fresh air. I opened my eyes and looked at him, he was looked at me for long time, my face was blushing when he smiles to me. I was nervous a little.

“What’s wrong?” I asked him fiercely, hide my nervous.

“Uh, nothing. You’re look so beauty today,” He tried to hide his smile.

“ Really? So, what’s the meaning of that smile? Huh?” I started to attack him. He stay calm.

“Do you like this place?” He asked me.

“Yeah,” I answered fiercely, “ So, what do you want?”

“Uh, well…” He sighed.

“ Can you look at that place?” He pointed toward my home.

“Yeah.., I can see it clearly.”

“Do you know that place?” He asked me.

“Of course ! That’s my home!” I started angry.

“Ok... Ok…, you know, I can see what happened on your backyard from here.

He’s right, I can see my sister playing there.

“So?” I asked angrily.

“You know, I always standing here every day to watch what are you doing.” I looked at him, He still looked at my house.

“W-WHAT?! What do you want? Hah?” I was so angry, I wanna hit him.

“Calm down, I just watch you.” He tried to calm me down.

“What for?” I still angry.

“Cause I can see you for long time? Don’t you know that I always care of you everytime ?!” He said with angrily, but I know he just bluffing.

“Hey, what’s wrong with you?!” I getting cooler.

“Don’t you know that I always care with you? Don’t you know that I always missed you? Don’t you know that I really loved you? Don’t you know that I cant live without you? Hah?”

“W-what..” I’m speechless.

“Why you never try to listen to me? I always try, and you never give me a chance.” He sat under the tree, playing with his finger.

“What do you mean?” I sat beside him. I still can’t believe what I heard, but I still calm.

He looked at me, looked my eyes and said, “ I love you, Claire..”

I said nothing, looked at sky, it look so clear, the clouds playing around, want me to say “Yes Va, I love you too..”. The wind blew gently.

“Claire…” He called me.

“What?” I looked at him, smiling gently.

“You mad?” He looks so afraid.

“Nope.” I said fiercely.

“I-I’m sorry Claire, I didn’t mean that thing, I ..”

“Sssh…” I put my finger on his lips. “Don’t say anything, Va. Look at that cloud, Isn’t look so beauty?”

We gazed at the clouds in the sky. They looks so beautiful when they reddish. The wind whispers gently make me felt peaceful.

Lightlantern

11-01-2010

===============================================================This is my first short story in English. I’m sorry if this story not interested anymore and cause my English is not good, I know there’s so much mistake –especially in grammar- hope you can correct my mistake and give me suggestion.

Thanks for read it . .

Ini cerpen pertama –dari sekian banyak cerpen- Aya yang jadi, gat au kenapa yang jadi malah yang pake bahasa inggris, padahal bahasa inggris Aya berantakan. Jadi, kalo banyak kesalahan dan ceritanya ga asik mohon maaf, soalnya Aya baru belajar,,,

Mohon Kritik dan Sarannya ya..



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